Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The charts provide information aboout people’s travel in ne country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The charts provide information aboout people’s travel in ne country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given chart illustrates a comparative analysis of people's travel

data

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, especially

time

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and

distance

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, in one nation from 1995 to 2015.

Overall

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while

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the line graph demonstrates

distance

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data

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, the bar graph provides

time

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data

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. In both illustrations, there was a similar pattern, which was

initially

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an upward trend, followed by a decline trend. In 1995, travelling

time

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was just above 6700

miles

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, but it had increased to around 6900

miles

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by 2000 and 7150

miles

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by 2005, demonstrating the highest value in 2005.

Then

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, the figure for

time

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sharply dropped to 6700 in 2010, followed by a slight decrease to 6600 in 2015.

According to

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distance

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data

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, it

also

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exhibited a similar pattern. The figures for

distance

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rose from 6950 in 1995 to 7150, the largest value throughout the period, in 2005. After that, it

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dropped significantly to 6700

miles

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and 6600

miles

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by 2010 and 2015, respectively, showing less travelling

time

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and

distance

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in the latter years.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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4
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

161 words

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