The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Ainazym

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Ainazym
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Ainazym
The layout displays information about
development
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the development
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stages
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of how plastic bottles are recycled.
Overall
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, the whole process
consist
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of several
stages
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and each stage has
own
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its own
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specific details about preparation. During the levels, both handmade and machine capital are used for reusing
of
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apply
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bottles. With a detailed analysis of the diagram, it involves 9 main
stages
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permanently.
Firstly
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, owing to kamaz, the bottles are collected from litter containers which
are threw
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are thrown
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by people and
then
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deliver
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delivered
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to
recycling
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the recycling
a recycling
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centre for sorting. After a
while
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whole redundant
bottless
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bottles
bottle
compress into blocks because they are crushed by special technology to spill into
washing
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the washing
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process.
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,
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last
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the last
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4
stages
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almost
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are almost
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related to
get
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getting
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a ready recycled product.
Initially
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, plastic pellets are produced by machine and
then
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carry
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carried
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to
heating
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the heating
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stage to gain a raw material. After finishing
whole
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the whole
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process, raw materials are converted to end products
such
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as pencils, t-shirts and packages.
As a result
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, all
stages
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are repeated consistently.

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