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The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates how many enquiries were sent to the customer service of a tourist office in the UK
Between
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 January and June.
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, it can be seen that
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 more people made an information request either via telephone or directly face-to-face, emails were less utilised throughout the provided period.
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, even though phones were the most popular option for the first few months, it was eventually replaced by the in-person method. Regarding the 2 means of asking for data with growths in uses, about 900 and 450 times requested information by telephone and in person in January, respectively. As for the mean of phones, it hit a low in usage at just 800 requests in over a month before nearly doubling to 1600 times by June.
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, those who demanded information
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 steadily rose for the whole timeframe to more than 1800 people after the 6-month period. Looking at the remaining way of getting pieces of instruction, mail requests witnessed a reduction in number, after having little to no changes from January to March
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 roughly 800 times, it started to slightly decrease to under 400 requests in
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 where it once again levelled off for the rest of the timeline.

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