In the
world, there has been a rapid shift towards consumerism.
of marketing famous consumer
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reflected by the high sales, not by the actual wants of the
in which they are sold. I fully agree
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notion,
of the
world.
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the advancements in technology.
have gotten very easy to display and reach every member of
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because of electronics
as phones, laptops and televisions. The various kinds of advertisements,
, posters, videos and billboards, have celebrities and famous people using or gifting the product, which compels their followers and fans to buy the same goods as they want to use the same item as their favourite. Eventually,
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in the sales of the particular consumer good.
, the companies pay influencers on social media to market their
and rate them positively
which more and more buyers purchase the goods
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, not because of urgent need but because of looks or convenience.
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websites
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sending emails of newly launched
to the consumers and
them of the
in their cart. When
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individual
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their website, they show several
on the home page, forcing the buyer to take a look before moving forward to buy their necessities. These sites
provide huge discounts and free items with
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the person to buy
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as well.
,
creates a
filled with unnecessary
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thrown out by the person and into the
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climate change.
,
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is a pressing issue which needs to be
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with caution. It is true that advertising plays a significant role in shaping consumer
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and boosting the sales of popular goods, it often does so by creating artificial desires rather than addressing genuine societal needs.