IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 2.5

Writing about a new words you learn it from your last level

To begin
Linking Words
with
Add a comma
with,
show examples
 some
high
Add a hyphen
high-level
show examples
level
Use synonyms
words
Use synonyms
 I learned from
Linking Words
last
Correct article usage
the last
show examples
tow
Correct your spelling
two
show examples
 months in
this
Linking Words
 school. As you know the English
languge
Correct your spelling
language
 has more than 500
words
Use synonyms
, so it is good for me to
known
Wrong verb form
know
show examples
halve
Correct your spelling
half
show examples
 of them and when I
said
Wrong verb form
say
show examples
high
Add a hyphen
high-level
show examples
level
Use synonyms
words
Use synonyms
 I mean
words
Use synonyms
 in B2 and C1
Use synonyms
level
Fix the agreement mistake
levels
show examples
.
For example
Linking Words
 "Surroundings"
this
Linking Words
 word
mean
Correct subject-verb agreement
means
show examples
that
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
things near
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
me, " I'm in my room and
surroundings
Correct article usage
the surroundings
show examples
 me my books,laptop and for sure my phone.
Another
Correct quantifier usage
Other
show examples
 word like "Log,
Fooding
Correct your spelling
food
 and Branch", so when you need to
sit
Correct your spelling
set
show examples
 fire
we
Correct pronoun usage
you
show examples
 need to use a lot of logs that
alredy
Correct your spelling
already
 come from the trees
spically
Correct your spelling
especially
 from one or more
branch
Fix the agreement mistake
branches
show examples
. Flooding, that water covered the streets after
rianing
Correct your spelling
rain
. It's really
high
Add a hyphen
high-level
show examples
level
Use synonyms
words
Use synonyms
 for me
also
Linking Words
 I think that
ammizing
Correct your spelling
amazing
words
Use synonyms
 you can use
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
to talk about some situations in real life,I mean
closs
Correct your spelling
close
 from my simple life.
Such
Linking Words
 as when I'm in the
dissert
Correct your spelling
dessert
show examples
 with my friends in the
Wenter
Correct your spelling
Winter
 we must sit
fire
Change preposition
on fire
show examples
 to make us feel warm, so the logs
is
Change the verb form
are
show examples
 useful for us.
Finlly
Correct your spelling
Finally
, that
level
Use synonyms
 was hard for me, but in my
view
Add a comma
view,
show examples
 it
boos
Wrong verb form
boosted
show examples
 my English vocabulary,
skills
Correct word choice
and skills
show examples
.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence and cohesion
Try to use clear paragraphs for your ideas. Start with an introduction, and have a clear end.
task achievement
Make sure to explain each word clearly and check for spelling mistakes.
task achievement
Use more examples to show how you use these words in real life.
positive
Your effort to learn new words is great!
positive
You provided personal examples, which makes your writing interesting!

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »- a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: