the diagram below shows the process of milk production

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diagram illustrates how the

milk

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we consume is produced. The routine of

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it originated to the items it can

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further be

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processed into, for

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, cheese, cream and even butter. The first stage is cow grazing, where cows from the farms are milked

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takes place twice within the span of

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twenty-four

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poured into storage containers and refrigerated to be chilled.

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is followed by

milk

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tankers delivering

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liquid to Dairy farms routinely. After that, the

milk

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is distributed and separated

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parts. One is where it is

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to make their dairy products

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such

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as cream and butter

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the other is

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cartons. In

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stage, the liquid is pasteurised and packaged

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bottles and cartons.

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, these packaged bottles are distributed and advertised to

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as supermarkets and

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stores.