The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now.

The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now.
The diagram shows the difference
of
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in
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a
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apply
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location between
two
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the two
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maps from 1995 to the present.
Overall
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,
this
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map has a certain change. In the housing area, it increased.
Although
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agricultural land and trees have decreased quite a lot. Infrastructure has been
also
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expanded,
some
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and some
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places have been replaced by
the
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apply
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entertainment
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
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. In 1995, the number of houses in the housing area was small. The entire southeast place was less developed, mainly in rural areas with a farm and a large forest park next to each other. In the south, there were a few small shops, hotels and a cafe.
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, there were fishing ports and fish markets to serve fishing and fish trading. Meanwhile, in the present, the whole map shows strong urbanization. The number of houses in residential areas is
built more
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increasing
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.
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, in 1995, the agricultural land part was completely replaced by the entertainment region with a golf course and two tennis courts. At the same time, the shops and fish market disappeared
instead
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of apartments and
high - class
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high-class
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restaurants that sprouted to serve tourism needs, The roads
are
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were
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expanded at housing to serve the travel needs of people

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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