The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the steps involved in the production of electricity using a variety of coal.
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, the process begins with the mining
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passes through seven stages and ends with the supply of electricity to the residents and industries. In the initial stage, mining is done with the help of machines from the soil. The extracted coal is
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crushed using a crusher in small parts which is
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stored in containers to transport to the Gasifier companies. When the
gas
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-producing firms receive the coal, they convert coal into the form of
gas
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using heat.
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, in the next step, the
gas
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is kept consistent for cooling and the waste heat is evaporated
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the air. In the
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stage, the generated
gas
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is cleaned to remove impurities using equipment in a factory.
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, the
gas
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is commuted to the
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power plant where the excess heat is removed and the electricity is formed. When the process completes, at
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, the power is supplied to the houses, apartments and commercial areas.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Coal mining
  • Open-pit mining
  • Transportation logistics
  • Power plant
  • Pulverized coal
  • Combustion
  • Boiler
  • Steam generation
  • Turbines
  • Kinetic energy
  • Electrical energy
  • Generator
  • Cooling and condensing
  • Recycling
  • Electricity transmission
  • National grid
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