TOPIC: More and more plastic waste is produced and polluting world’s cities, countryside and oceans What are the possible reasons? What can be done to solve the problems?

The role of
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waste has become a subject of debate in contemporary society, as
pollution
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caused by
plastic
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affects the environment severely. From my personal perspective, there are several reasons that lead to the increase
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plastic
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usage and
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cause more damage in our society. Primarily, the cost of plastics is minimal, which is the most obvious reason why
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plastic
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has been widely used. For an industry like manufacturing and food catering, it is common to see that corporations prioritize profits over environmentally friendly policies
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their
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margins. Take Safeway, one of the biggest supermarkets in Canada,
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. After
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the Canadian
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government applied the
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bag ban, they were forced to find
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more ecological sustainable alternatives
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ecological
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sustainable alternatives, which ended up with using
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paper bags.
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, expenditure related to
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change was 30% higher compared with the time when they mainly used
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bags.
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, to extend the first reason even
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the majority
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of business owners neglect
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the effects
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that plastics can create mainly
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the lack of awareness about ecologic prevention. They are more willing to focus on short-term financial returns, rather than considering long-term, cross-generation impacts on
plastic
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waste
pollution
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, simply because they have no knowledge of how waste can damage our ecosystem at all.
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, many manufacturers overlook microplastic leakage into oceans, underestimating long-term food chain contamination. There are certain actions that can significantly address those problems mentioned above. Strict regulation can be conducted to force corporations to comply with a sustainable
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method. Meanwhile, compensation should be subsidized by governments to overshadow expenditure increases on companies and release them from financial burdens to some degree.
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, education can be made via different media,
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as television advertising, to explain the potential but irreversible damage that
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pollute
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can cause. In conclusion, prevailing profits over
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pollution
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, and lack of awareness are causing the negative effects from
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impacts even worse.
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actions,
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as regulation compliance and government
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, can be made to reverse damages and minimize the
pollution
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caused by
pollution
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.

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You have a clear introduction that states your opinion on plastic waste.
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You provided some good examples, like the case of Safeway, that illustrate your points about business practices.

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