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The chart below shows the book sales for five different types of fiction books from 2006 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Aruzhan

The chart below shows the book sales for five different types of fiction books from 2006 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Aruzhan
The bar chart compares the gross
earnings
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 of five different fiction book genres over a 4-year
period
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 between 2006 and 2010. Units are measured in dollars.
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, what stands out from the chart is that the
sales
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 of Mystery and
Romance
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books
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 were consistently highest throughout the timeframe, with
Romance
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 generally outperforming all other genres each year.
On the other hand
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, there were lower
earnings
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 with relatively minor fluctuations in the rates of Young Adult, Classics, and Sci-Fi & Fantasy
books
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. Moving to a more detailed analysis, the indicators of
earnings
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 of Mystery and
Romance
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books
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 accounted for 6,000,000 and 8,000,000 respectively, in 2006. 2007 witnessed a significant increase in the
sales
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 for
romance
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, reaching an
appex
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apex
 of around 118,000,00. After that, there was a sudden plunge to the vicinity of 7,000,000 in the
earnings
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 of
Romance
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 works in the following year and
then
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 it recovered to finish the
period
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 at approximately 81,000,000 from 2008 to 2010. The figure for the revenues of mystery
books
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 followed a similar pattern with
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Romance
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 genre, peaking at around 81,000 in 2007.
Next,
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it decreased sharply to nearly 55,000,000 in the next year and between 2008 and 2010 end of the
period
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, returning
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 same level in 2008.
In contrast
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, the rates of
sales
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 for Young Adult, Classics, Sci-Fi & Fantasy stood at around 30
million
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, 19
million
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 and roughly 18
million
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 in 2006. These literary types remained under 4
million
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the
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 timeframe.
Sci-Fi
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 was the least popular book genre in all years, with
sales
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 below 20
milion
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million
,
while
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 the figures for Classics and Young Adult book profits saw minor fluctuations, finishing the
period
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 at around 28
millon
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million
 and approximately 7
million
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, respectively.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words earnings, period, sales, romance, books, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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