25 June 2025, The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.

25 June 2025, The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for 25 June 2025, The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.
The pie chart depicts the estimated global production across six sectors in 2040 and 2060.
Overall
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, the service sector is projected to make up the majority of global production in both years.
In addition
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, all sectors
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are
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estimated to present an increase, except for agriculture and energy. In terms of the service sector, the figure is likely to rise slightly from 40% in 2040 to 41% in 2060, making it the
most
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biggest
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contributor to global production. A similar trend is observed in information and communication technology, which
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from 15% to 16%.
By comparison
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, manufacturing is
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expected to grow from 31% to 33%, presenting the largest increase of 2%.
On the other hand
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, the remaining three sectors are projected to account for less than 10% over the given period.
The energy
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Energy
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will likely decline from 7% to 5%, followed by agriculture, which drop from 4% to 1%, becoming the least significant contributor in 2060 and
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the largest decrease of 3%. Meanwhile, the material sector is estimated to record a marginal increase from 3% to 4%, despite accounting for the smallest proportion in 2040.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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