What does the chart show about the trends in telephone usage between 1998 and 2005?

We can see in the chart that there is no big

deference

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difference

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between all the numbers. But there is an

increase

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in the number of the minutes By the way. In

the

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apply

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1998 the local telephone was the

bigger

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biggest

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number between the national and the mobile. And it did not really change

while

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the years

running

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ran

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. But the national one is more than the mobile. And the mobile was not massively known at the time, compared to now And if we

talked

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talk

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about the mobile there

was

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were

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not a lot of people using mobiles at the time but there is a

little

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small

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number but in the

chart

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chart,

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we can see how the mobile increased between 1998 and 2005 and it is a big

increase

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. And we can see the national and international ones having a good

increase

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. But the local one

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has been

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decreasing

among

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over

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the years and it seems to not

increase

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anymore

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Jun 25, 2025

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153 words

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