The graph below gives information from a2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projectionsuntil 2030. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projectionsuntil 2030. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information from a2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projectionsuntil 2030. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
consumption
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of different types of fuel during the period from 1980 until now and
additionally
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, there is a prediction about
consumption
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in the near future until 2030.
Overall
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, petrol and oil are the most common sources of energy which were widely used in the
last
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century and will continue to be the most popular in the future,
while
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the trend of
consumption
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of alternative fuels probably will remain consistently low. In detail, if we look at the level of the usage of petrol it is at least two times higher than others over the entire period.
Although
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in the period between 1980 and 2000, petrol was not spent
stability
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, in the following years there was only growth in expenses
as well as
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the spending on coal.
On the other hand
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, exploration of alternative types of energy remains relatively low. In 1980
the
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nuclear and natural sources,
such
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as solar or water, of fuel were around the same level of
consumption
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.
By
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the current
time
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time,
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the usage of nuclear and solar/wind power has slightly increased,
while
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hydropower has been used less. Based on the researcher's prognosis, there will not be significant changes in terms of exploration of all of these fuels.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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