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IELTS Essay Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Essay Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates transport preferences among youngsters during a single year in four different countries
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 the UK, the
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, France and Italy.
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, in the UK and in the
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automobile
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 have the same usage,
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 most Italians prefer cars. Motorbikes are mostly used and bikes are least used in the
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 .
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between the
 3 types of transport.
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, it is the only area where bikes are used the most - 45%.
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, British people use bicycles in 1/3 of cases, in
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USA
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 and Italy they are used only 1 time out of 10. Motorcycles have a similar situation. In all countries,
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 prefer them only in 10 per cent of cases, except
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USA
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 where every third individual uses them.
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 what is shown, cars are the most popular almost everywhere.
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, in the both
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 and the UK they have 60% preference, but in France, they are preferred by 20% less. In Italy, more than 70% of young people are using cars, rather than motorcycles or bicycles.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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