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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart depicts the share of Australian
men
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 and
women
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 categorized
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 6 age groups, starting with 15-24 years old until 65 years old and over, who did regular physical
exercise
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 in 2010.
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, in the majority of
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 the proportion of
women
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 doing
exercise
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 was bigger than that of
men
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, except for the first
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, which
men
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 were higher. The share of
men
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 doing
exercise
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 in the first
group
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 was 52.8%, 5% higher than that of females. The proportion of
women
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 doing physical activity in the
third,
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fourth and fifth groups
were
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equal 53%,
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 percentage
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 12%, 10% and 8% bigger than males in that order. In the first
group
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, the portion of
men
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 doing
exercise
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 was 42.2%, 6% lower than that of
women
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 exercising. In the
last
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group
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, the contribution of
men
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 doing physical
exercise
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 was 46.7%, slightly smaller than that of
women
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 (47.1%).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, exercise, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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