The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart provides key information about the

sector

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contributions to India’s gross domestic product in the years ranging between 1960 to 2000. The units are measured in percentages.

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, it is clear from the graph that there were three

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sector

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sectors

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agriculture

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industry

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, and

services

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share in India's GDP. It is shown that the

agriculture

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sector

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had the highest

percenatage

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percentage

between 1960 to 1980. The

industry

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and

services

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sectors had the same proportion in 1960.

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, throughout the interval of 1970 to 1980 both

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industry

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the industry

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and

services

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sectors had the same

percent

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percentage

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between 30% to 20%.

According to

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what is shown in 1990, there were many

changing

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changes

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Agriculture

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The agriculture

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sector

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was

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apply

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decreased from 60% until reachead 30%.

Industry

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remained stable in the same

percenage

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percentage

Services

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contributions had a gradual

increased

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increase

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arrive

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arriving

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at 45%. In terms of 2000,

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Agriculture

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the Agriculture

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sector

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was

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apply

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decreased.

Industry

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remained stable in the same

ration

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ratio

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nearly

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of nearly

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25%.

Services

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had the highest proportion

rechead

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reached

redhead

tham

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than

60%.

dareen.nu

Jun 25, 2025

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sector, agriculture, industry, services with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

158 words

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