Every year several Ianuages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no

dening

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denying

the fact

the

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that

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'Every year',several

languages

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vanish ,some

people

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believ

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believe

languages

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not

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are not

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important in the world, Because life will be easier.

while

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it is a commonly held

belife

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belief

that life comes

simple

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simply

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with using and learning more than one

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languages

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language

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,there is

also

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agurment

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argument

that opposes it. in my

oponion

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opinion

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consider that

teach

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teaching

show examples

has many

languages

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in the world.

to begin

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with helps

humen

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humans

important learning

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learn

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some and more

languages

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which improve themselves.

in other words

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, all can understand and

feels

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feel

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people

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from different cities and ,

another nationalities

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another nationality

other nationalities

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in addition

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however

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can

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there can

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have

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multi

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multiple

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types

customs

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of customs

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also

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tradition

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traditions

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from each

countries

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country

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, which now introdection about life and study and food

although

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places

beautiful

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are beautiful

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there visiting

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apply

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others.

for example

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, '

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the france

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france

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French

language

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mebey difecult

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be difficult

, but with study can be

success

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successful

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and devloper. another point to consider

languages

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are essential for

traviling

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travelling

around

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the

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world ,that

useful

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are useful

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and

help

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helpful

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for all

personal

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personnel

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. it is

also

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possible to say that

language

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insper

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inspire

conection togethers

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connection together

tooking

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toking

and speaking the

sames

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same

more ever

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Moreover

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language

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enhances

problem solving

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problem-solving

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by allowing persons

learn

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to learn

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English or

France

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French

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any one

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anyone

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easy to

conect

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connect

for instance

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apply

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transaction

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transactions

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where we go any side become

simples

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simple

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and

finsh

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finish

earlly

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early

. in conclusion , despite

people

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having different views,

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believe that ,

advance

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in advance

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every one

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everyone

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have

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has

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more energy and power to

developing

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develop

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and teaching some

language

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using

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use

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any

were

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where

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going or changes city ,

approxemitly

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approximately

people

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needs

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need

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more than two

languages

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for

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facilitate our

lifes

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lives

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and

works

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work

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Try to have clearer main ideas in each paragraph. Each paragraph should focus on one main point.

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Provide clearer examples and explanations to support your points. For example, explain why learning languages helps with traveling.

content

The essay discusses the importance of learning multiple languages, which is a good main idea.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

253 words

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