You currently live in a rental apartment, and the noise from your neighbors disturbs you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter •describe how this situation affects you; •explain what steps you have taken to address the problem; •ask the landlord to take action to resolve the issue.

Dear Mr. Tai, I am writing

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letter because I have a problem with the neighbour in the next apartment. I

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your apartment for one month already. Every evening, the neighbour plays music very loud and sings until midnight. I cannot sleep well. I work in a restaurant during the day, and I feel very tired when I come home. I need to sleep early, but the noise is too loud. I tried to speak to the neighbour and asked him to stop, but he didn’t listen to me. Now I don’t know what to do. I hope you can talk to him or find another way to fix

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problem. If the noise continues, I may need to move out. Thank you very much. I hope to hear from you soon. Best regards,

luutuantai12345

Jun 26, 2025

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Try to add more details about how the noise makes you feel.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure each paragraph clearly focuses on one idea.

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Use a more formal tone in your request to the landlord.

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You clearly stated the problem with the neighbor.

coherence and cohesion

The closing is polite and appropriate.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

135 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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