The graph below provides the amount of books which were borrowed in four various months in 2014 from four village libraries, with the pie chart indicating the proportion of books that were borrowed over this period.

The graph below provides the amount of books which were borrowed in four various months in 2014 from four village libraries, with the pie chart indicating the proportion of books that were borrowed over this period.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below provides the amount of books which were borrowed in four various months in 2014 from four village libraries, with the pie chart indicating the proportion of books that were borrowed over this period.
The bar graph depicts the number of books that were taken from four village libraries for a period of 4 months starting from June to September
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2014.
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, there was an increase in the amount of books borrowed in all villages except for Ryeslip which constantly declined.
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ones, which showed an equal contribution at the beginning i.e. West Eaton and Church Mount with 50 in June, have diverged a little bit in between but, ended up together at 150 by the end of the period. The latter was slow
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to the former in the beginning, but after July showed a significant escalation till the end.
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, the former showed a sharp rise in the starting till August and
then
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plateaued till
september
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. It is evident that
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Ryeslip was one of the biggest contributors
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the start but, has
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dipped from 300 to the highest fall at around 160 by the final month.
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, Sutton Wood fluctuated
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, increased a bit till July, and dropped
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lowest at 100 before rising back to 300 by becoming the highest contributor in the
last
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 65%.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • borrow
  • books
  • month
  • village
  • libraries
  • amount
  • proportion
  • new
  • year
  • people
  • reading
  • number
  • activities
  • increase
  • decrease
  • enjoy
  • weather
  • family
  • time
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