People spend less time at home than they used to. What are the reasons for this change and what are effects on society and individuals.

Nowadays most
people
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are eager to hang out with friends or simply to spend
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out of
home
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. In my opinion,
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is mostly
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the high cost of
houses
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and the consequent reduction of space to host guests at
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. For that reason, there are significant
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in the way
people
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spend
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and socialize, causing
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crucial issues for public administrators
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managing public
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. In my opinion, the rise
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the
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houses'
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houses
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price
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prices
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is the main reason why
people
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choose to spend
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out,
for instance
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going
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the
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restaurant,
instead
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of dining at
home
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.
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in
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rural
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the prices are still affordable, in
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urban contexts
houses
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are increasingly expensive and families are likely to buy smaller apartments than before.
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, the cost of
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in Milan has increased
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30% in just five years. In comparison, workers
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only 8% more. Recent research
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ISTAT, the Italian Institute for Research, shows that in the same
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a reduction of 25% in the size of the
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bought by families has occurred . The main consequence of
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process is that
people
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meet out,
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going to the restaurant to celebrate happenings or just meeting in public
spaces
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. On the one hand,
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represents a positive aspect as public
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become crowded
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people
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.
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restaurants, shopping centres and other commercial activities thrive.
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, there is an evident drawback for the families,
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the cost of
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lifestyle.
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,
people
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belonging to lower classes might not have enough money,
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they often
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public
spaces
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like parks, treating them as their personal space and leaving them in bad condition, dirty and ruined. In conclusion, I think that the phenomenon
to spend
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of spending
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time
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out of
home
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is not necessarily spontaneous but it is mainly related to the lack of room at
home
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.
This
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drives
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positive
consequences
as well as
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crucial issues, which should be better managed by public administrations to preserve public open
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,
thus
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allowing the whole community to benefit from them.

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