the pie chart illustrates the generated electricity in
Germany
and Use synonyms
France
from renewable Use synonyms
sources
and other Use synonyms
sources
in the year 2009.
Use synonyms
Overall
, both countries Linking Words
depends
on renewable Change the verb form
depend
sources
very less Use synonyms
compare
to other Wrong verb form
compared
sources
. Use synonyms
France
is Use synonyms
depended
on Nuclear power, Replace the word
dependent
while
Linking Words
Germany
Use synonyms
is relaying
on conventional thermal Wrong verb form
relies
source
of Fix the agreement mistake
sources
energy
. In terms of natural Use synonyms
energy
Use synonyms
sources
Use synonyms
Germany
used Biomass and wind power and Use synonyms
France
used Use synonyms
majority
of hydroelectric Add an article
the majority
a majority
energy
.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, thermal Linking Words
energy
59.6% was used by Use synonyms
Germany
, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
France
used 76% nuclear Use synonyms
energy
compared to 23% used by Use synonyms
Germany
. Use synonyms
France
Use synonyms
have
very less Change the verb form
has
option
to use thermal Fix the agreement mistake
options
consuption
Correct your spelling
consumption
is
around 10.%. Unnecessary verb
apply
Moreover
, Linking Words
combined
Correct article usage
the combined
consuption
of Correct your spelling
consumption
energy
in Use synonyms
Germany
is more Use synonyms
by
50 Billion Kwh Change preposition
than
at
Change preposition
per
560Billion
kwh.
Correct your spelling
560 billion
Furthermore
, in renewable Linking Words
sources
of Use synonyms
energy
used by both Use synonyms
nation
Fix the agreement mistake
nations
is
nearly Correct subject-verb agreement
are
same
, Correct article usage
the same
where
Correct word choice
whereas
France
used Use synonyms
very
Correct article usage
a very
less
amount of solar Correct word choice
small
energy
less Use synonyms
Linking Words
then
a single percentage. Replace the word
than
Germany
used around 94% of their Use synonyms
energy
from biomass,wind and hydroelectric Use synonyms
sources
, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
France
used Use synonyms
huge
80.5% renewable power only from hydroelectric current.Correct article usage
a huge