The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the total comparison of population
ages
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in two countries
Yemen
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and Italy from 2000 to projections for 2050.
Overall
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, it's clear that Italy's averages were the highest in 2000,
while
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in
Yemen
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projection averages will be highest in 2050. In 2000,
Yemen
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had the highest
score
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in younger
ages
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between 0 to 14
years
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for 50.1%, followed by averages between 15 to 59
years
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for 46.3%. it's almost be same with younger
ages
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. and the lowest was for older
ages
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60
years
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and up 3.6%. Italy has the highest
score
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in middle
ages
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from 15 to 59
years
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at 61.6%,
then
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followed
older
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by older
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aged 60
years
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and
more
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older
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at 24.1%, and
last
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was in younger
ages
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from 0 to 14
years
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it's was
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it with
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the lowest
score
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of 14.3%. In projections for 2050 in
Yemen
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will be highest in middle
ages
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between 15 to 59
years
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at 57.3%, but in Italy average of 15 to 59
years
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will be 46.2%, and in
Yemen
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we can see the lowest
score
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was for older 60years and more for 5.7%,
while
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in Italy it was highest for 42.3%, and population
ages
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of younger from 0 to 14years have 37.0% in
Yemen
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it's was more than Italy population
ages
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of younger for 11.5%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ages, yemen, score, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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