The diagram below shows the procedure for making a cup of coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram above displays the process of how a cup of coffee is produced.

Overall

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, the process starts

by

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with

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collecting coffee

beans

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and goes by different machines in every stage with a total of 11 steps.

Firstly

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, the process starts with the farmers

by

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apply

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collecting coffee

beans

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and

dry

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drying

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them

by

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in

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the

sunlights

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sunlight

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.

Next,

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after they dry, they heat them up to roast the

beans

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. After

that

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that,

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they put them in a cold machine to cool them. In the following step, the farmer

take

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takes

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the

beans

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out of the machine and

put

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puts

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them in the smasher to grind them.

At

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In

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step six, after the

beans

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were smashed they

add

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added

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hot water to the

beans

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and

mix

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mixed

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them together to produce a mixture.

After

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this

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, the mixture is strained by

strainer

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the strainer

a strainer

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. After

that

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that,

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it enters a freezer to freeze the mixture. In the following step, it enters the grinder to grind the frozen liquid and

then

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they put the liquid on fire to dry them.

Lastly

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,

the

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apply

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after they dry they fill jars with them and they are ready to use.