The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.

The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.
The line graph depicts information about the mean daily maximum
temperatures
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for
Auckland
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and
Christchurch
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, two
cities
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in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two
cities
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in the UK.
Tempaerature
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Temperature
measured in degree
celsius
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Celsius
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.
Overall
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,
Auckland
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and
Christchurch
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had the highest
temperatures
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from the beginning of the period to the end of the period,
whereas
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London and Edinburgh had the
least
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lowest
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temperatures
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from January to December.
In addition
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, the
temperatures
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in both
cities
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fluctuated throughout the entire time. The two
cities
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in Australia,
Auckland
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and
Christchurch
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, had temperature readings of about 24
degrees
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in January before remaining relatively stable at 10 and 15
degrees
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in
Christchurch
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and
Auckland
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respectively between July and August.
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,
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in both
cities
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rose gradually to about 20
degrees
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celsius
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in December.
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, Edinburgh and London had the same temperature readings of 5
degrees
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celsius
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in
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the beginning of the year before rising significantly to about 18 and 22
degrees
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respectively in the 7th and 8th months of the year.
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,
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from both
cities
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increased moderately to 20
degrees
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in December.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words temperatures, auckland, christchurch, cities, degrees with synonyms.
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