The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie chart demonstrated the proportion of
water
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in industrial,
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agriculture
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agricultural
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and domestic
use
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in six areas of the world.
The
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Agriculture
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agriculture
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made up the
most
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largest
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portion of
water
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use
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in South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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.
Nonetheless
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, the
inudustrial
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industrial
use
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dominanted
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dominated
in North
America
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and Europe. It is undeniable that
the
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apply
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agriculture
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was the
most
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largest
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part
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user
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in
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of
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water
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used
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apply
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(88%) not only in Central
Asia
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but
also
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among
the
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apply
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all six areas of the world. Africa,
South East
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Southeast
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Asia
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and South
America
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followed at 84%, 82% and 71%, respectively. What's more, the industrial
use
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constituted
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accounted
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to
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for
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the least in South
America
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at 10%, Africa at 7% and Central
Asia
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at 5%.
While
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the domestic
use
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contributed
to
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apply
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the least in South East
Asia
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at 7%.
However
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, in the developed countries, North
America
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and Europe, the industrial
use
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was the largest
portions
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portion
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of
water
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consumption at 48% and 53% respectively, followed by the
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agriculture
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agricultural
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use
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(39% and xx%) and the domestic
use
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(13% and xx%).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, agriculture, use, america, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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