The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The six pie charts demonstrate the proportion of
water
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consumed for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes in six different regions on earth.
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, agriculture accounts for the largest proportion of
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use
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in South
America
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, Africa, Central Asia and Southeast Asia,
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industrial
water
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consumption is dominant in North
America
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and Europe.Domestic
use
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takes up the smallest share of
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in all six areas. In the four specific regions, apart from South
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,
water
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use
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in farming accounts for a maximum
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80% ,which is far higher than domestic and industrial consumption. The gap between household and industrial is relatively small,
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the former is nearly twice as large as the latter in South
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.
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, in North
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and Europe, industry is the main
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consumer, at 48% and 53% respectively, followed by agriculture at 39% and 32%.Domestic
water
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use
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is consistently low everywhere. North
America
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has the highest domestic percentage at 13%,
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Central Asia only uses 5% of
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for household needs.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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