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in
2011. The increasing methods people used very Change preposition
apply
common
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commonly
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this
period were Change preposition
during this
telephone
and Use synonyms
in
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in-person
person
. The Use synonyms
telephone
was green, Use synonyms
fluctuated
slightly between January and March. Within the same period of Correct word choice
and fluctuated
telephone
, the Use synonyms
in
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in-person
person
rises across the range of approximately 400 to 800 enquiries, drawing red Use synonyms
color
. Change the spelling
colour
However
, there was a slight reducing enquiries by letter or email Linking Words
in
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at
this
stage. Linking Words
On
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In
the
March 2011, the Change the article
apply
telephone
was higher than Use synonyms
in
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in-person
person
method, which was about 200 Use synonyms
enquires
, but Replace the word
enquiries
on
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in
the
June 2011, the Change the article
apply
telephone
was lower than Use synonyms
in
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in-person
person
around 300 questions. The red index Use synonyms
was climbing
dramatically questions, Wrong verb form
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was
from around 800 to over 1900 Unnecessary verb
apply
requires
over 3 months. Verb problem
apply
Besides
. The green index remained stable from Linking Words
Marth
to April, and suddenly Correct your spelling
March
increasing
from about 1000 to 1600 Wrong verb form
increased
enquires
. Replace the word
enquiries
In contrast
, the red index was falling steadily between March to MayLinking Words
,
and stayed around under 400 enquiries in the final month.Remove the comma
apply