The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data provides information about the proportion of
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living in cities across four Asian countries starting from 1970 until 2020, with a prediction of how those percentages would become in 2030 and 2040.
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, all four countries have increased from 1970 to 2020, and are expected to increase even more in 2040.
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, Malaysia and
Indonesia
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saw a bigger rise when compared to
Thailand
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and
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Philippines
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the Philippines
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.
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Indonesia
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started with the
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lowest
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back in 1970, it is predicted that they are going to overtake second place by the year 2040,
while
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Philippines
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the Philippines
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will remain in first place. Two of the four countries saw a significant rise both in the first period
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and in the 20-year prediction for the future.
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Philippines
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The Philippines
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had 30% back in 1970
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and had a steady rise until 1970,
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it started to increase and is set to end the fourth decade of the millennium with more than 80%.
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,
Indonesia
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began with just above 10% and is thought to end 2040 with more than sixfold
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what they started with. Even though
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Philippines
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the Philippines
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and
Thailand
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did not have the same substantial surge, they still had a notable increase. With
Thailand
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starting just below 20%, they are set to end
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around 50%,
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, in 2000
Thailand
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had almost an identical percentage as
Indonesia
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Philippines
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had the steadiest growth in the graph, with a starting percentage of just above 30%
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set to become just over 50% by the time we reach 2040.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the seventh paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words indonesia, thailand, philippines with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the seventh paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • percentage
  • population
  • predictions
  • significant increase
  • dramatic rise
  • urban population
  • industrial growth
  • economic development
  • steady growth
  • urban migration
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