In contemporary society, many young
people
consider celebrities as role models. Use synonyms
While
some support Linking Words
this
admiration, others argue that it may exert a harmful influence on adolescents. Linking Words
This
essay will discuss both perspectives before explaining why I personally side with the latter view.
On the one hand, setting well-known individuals as an example to follow can offer some distinctive benefits for Linking Words
young
generation. Correct article usage
the young
Firstly
, there are several famous Linking Words
people
who have underprivileged and humble backgrounds achieving distinguished success Use synonyms
by
their relentless effort, passion and perseverance. Change preposition
through
Such
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people
can be a good example for young Use synonyms
people
to follow and overcome obstacles in life. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
athelete
like Serena Willam Correct your spelling
athletes
has
emphasized Correct subject-verb agreement
have
on
discipline and passion in the process of reaching her goals, Change preposition
apply
aspired
Verb problem
inspiring
people
to consistently follow their dreams. Use synonyms
Moreover
, many celebrities have taken advantage of their social media accounts to call for assistance to tackle pressing social issues, encouraging the youth to contribute positively to society.
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On the other hand
, youngsters are immature and easily affected by their idols during their growing up as they often mimic their idols to demonstrate their identity and satisfy their ego. Linking Words
Therefore
, famous individuals can adversely impact Linking Words
on
the young if they engage in controversial Change preposition
apply
behaviors
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behaviours
such
as gambling or alcohol abuse. Linking Words
In addition
, most of them frequently chase flashy, Linking Words
luxious
and unhealthy Correct your spelling
luxurious
life styles
, which emphasize Correct your spelling
lifestyles
on
materialism and consumerism, making the young Change preposition
apply
to
feel unsatisfied with their life and Fix the infinitive
apply
tieing
their self-esteem to material wealth.
In conclusion, having Verb problem
tie
crush
on famous Add an article
a crush
people
and setting them as role models would benefit the young in terms of passion and perseverance. Use synonyms
Howerver
, I believe that Correct your spelling
However
family
, Fix the agreement mistake
families
school
and educators should teach their children critical evaluation when choosing their role models in order to curb Fix the agreement mistake
schools
the
negative influences.Correct article usage
apply