The maps describe the changes which took place in a town called Frenton over 22 years, starting from 1990.

The maps describe the changes which took place in a town called Frenton over 22 years, starting from 1990.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps describe the changes which took place in a town called Frenton over 22 years, starting from 1990.
The two maps depict the evolution of a Frenton area during the 22-year period (1990-2012) showing a clear development.
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, the areas had undergone significant redevelopment, with the addition of new facilities, and the replacement and modification of existing structures,
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some reduction in green spaces
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happened. In 1990, the northern part of the map located playing fields with trees, which were replaced by blocks of flats in 2012.
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, to the southeast of the map, the area that was originally shops and houses was redeveloped into more blocks of flats and a large supermarket.
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, the café and park in the central part of town was converted into a hotel and golf course. Several new facilities appeared in 2012. A cinema was added in place of the theatre to the south of the map, and trees were converted into a technopark. A new restaurant
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replaced the bank in the northwestern corner. Some structures remained unchanged during all of the period. The school and library both remained the original locations and functions,
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the hospital stayed in the same place but became a little bigger
at the end
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of the period.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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