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The table below shows the number of Australian students studying abroad from 2004 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The table below shows the number of Australian students studying abroad from 2004 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart provides data on the number of Australian
students
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 who studied in five different countries—
USA
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, New Zealand, UK, Germany, and Japan—over the period from 2004 to 2006. The
USA
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 consistently had the highest number of Australian
students
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 throughout the period. In 2004, about 2,600
students
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 went to the
USA
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, and
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 figure rose steadily, reaching nearly 2,900 by 2006. New Zealand followed a similar pattern, starting just below the
USA
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 at around 2,550
students
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 and increasing slightly each year to about 2,700. The UK attracted fewer
students
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 than the
USA
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 and New Zealand but still saw growth, from approximately 1,500
students
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 in 2004 to around 1,650 in 2006.
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, the numbers for Germany and Japan remained much lower and relatively stable. Germany saw a slight increase, rising from just over 100 to nearly 200
students
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,
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 Japan experienced a small decline during the same period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, usa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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