The table below shows the number of Australian students studying abroad from 2004 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The table below shows the number of Australian students studying abroad from 2004 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the number of Australian students studying abroad from 2004 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
number
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of learners studying abroad between 2004 and 2006.
Overall
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,it can be seen that,
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a
number
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of Australian
students
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studying abroad in the United States of America the converse was true for
Germany
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and
Japan
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. Looking first at 2004, around 2600 Australian
students
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went to the USA.
This
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number
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increased steadily to approximately 2800 in 2005 and reached 3000 by 2006.
Similarly
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, New Zealand attracted just over 2500
students
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in 2004, and
this
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figure rose slightly over the next two years, reaching nearly 2700 in 2006. The UK saw a more modest
number
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of
students
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, starting at about 1500 in 2004 and rising to nearly 1700 in 2006.
In contrast
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,
Germany
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and
Japan
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had very low student numbers, both starting at around 200 in 2004.
Germany
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showed a small increase each year,
while
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the
number
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of
students
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going to
Japan
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slightly declined by 2006.
On the other hand
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, the USA remained the most popular destination for Australian
students
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from 2004 to 2006,
whereas
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Germany
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and
Japan
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had the least interest.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, germany, japan with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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