The first chart shows the percentage of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks. ( cooking. Cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house) The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task day.

The first chart shows the percentage of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks. ( cooking. Cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house) The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task day.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The first chart shows the percentage of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks. ( cooking. Cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house) The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task day.
The chart constitutes information about the percentage of domestic chores by lady and gent and the duration each gender spent on each task per day.
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,
while
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cooking was a dominant task which was mostly done by matrons, men were more busy with house repairs.
To begin
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with, from the Cooking authority
ladies
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were 80% and gentlemen were less than women at 60 proportion, and coming to cleaning
ladies
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were slightly decreased to 60 per cent and
likewise
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, the fellow was 40 per cent off in
this
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begetter. And there in that animal care option two genders where identical patterns can be observed in both 20 per cent. And the
last
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commencement was house repairs and in that guys were more active and in 20% than
ladies
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they were in 0% of
this
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resource. Starting from time scratch between
ladies
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and gentlemen from the first expert it becomes noticeable within the first resource. And in cooking it was slightly different in the females' option and it was 80 times spent a day and in the second cleaning it made no difference and in the pet care option there was a slight change in male position and it became 20 times spent a day and the
last
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house repairs same in men but significantly higher in women.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ladies with synonyms.
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