The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
The pie and bar charts display the utilization of
water
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sources during the year 2000 in three fields which are (Agriculture , Domestic, and Industry) and in the following countries: China , India , New Zealand , and Canada. Farming and Planting activities ranked first and consumed the most amount of
water
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as it indicates 70 % of the
overall
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water
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usage which is in China at 69 per
cent
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and in India at 92 per
cent
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.
Whereas
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, it was the lowest in Canada at only 8 per
cent
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.
Therefore
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,
water
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use in the industry field ranked second at 22 % and secured 80 per
cent
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of Canada's utilization and least in the other countries. As for the domestic, it placed at third
by
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8% and indicated the highest in New Zealand at 46 per
cent
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while
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it was nearly the
least
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lowest
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classification in China and India by 9% and 5%, respectively.

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