Some believe governments should spend more money on improving roads and highways, while some think money should be spent improving public transportation, such as buses, trains, and subways. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

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people
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think that
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authority must spend
money
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on
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roads
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road
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and
highways
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improvement ,
while
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other
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others
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believe that more amount should be spent on improving
road
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transport
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like trains and buses. Every person has their own point of view. In
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I will discuss both
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views. On one hand, there are
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of individuals who think that government should take care of
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and highway maintenance by spending more and more. There are several reasons why
people
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think about
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and highway maintenance. First of
all
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there are several climate and weather conditions
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which a good
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is extremely important for
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road transport
a means of road transport
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road
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transport
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.
For instance
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, in
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the rainy
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season , it rains like cats and dogs.
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poor quality
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get easily damaged and can
also
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lead to
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accidents. As per the survey conducted by Times of India , in the year
2020
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2020,
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many
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died and got serious injuries
due to
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poor
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conditions. Is is the reason
being
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people
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ask authorities to pay more
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on
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good quality
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road
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roads
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.
On the other hand
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, there are numerous
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who
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a
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opinion about spending more amount of
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on public
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. In
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case , there are
also
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a few
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reasons why
people
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think so. First of all, if
government
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the government
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will improvise the bus and train services. So,
people
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will rely more on public
transport
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, which help to reduce the traffic
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on
roads
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.
Secondly
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, using trains and buses will help to reduce
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air and noise pollution as well. As per the survey conducted by Delhi
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in year 2020, the air quality degraded in Delhi, India.
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people
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suffered
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from breathing issues like asthma and allergies etc.
To conclude
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, in my
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both
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aspects are important.
Government
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The government
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must take care of all
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apply
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aspects from taking care of
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and
highway
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highways
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to spending
money
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on public transportation as well.

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