The maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Norbiton and the proposed future development of the town.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Norbiton and the proposed future development of the town.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Norbiton and the proposed future development of the town.
These two maps give us information about the present layout and future plans for an industrial region in the town of Norbiton. In general, the existing factories will be demolished and more residential areas will be built with appropriate facilities
such
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as
school
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schools
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and medical
centre
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centres
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. The main road will be built across the
river
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. Located east of the town, the entire industrial
area
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is centred on a circular road around which eight factories are evenly spaced. There is a
river
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in the north that separates the industrial
area
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from the agricultural land. In the future, the
area
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will be transformed from an industrial to a residential
area
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. The eight factories will be replaced by seven residential buildings, and facilities
such
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as
shop
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shops
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,
school
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schools
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, medical
centre
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centres
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and
playground
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playgrounds
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will be built to improve residents’
life
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living
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conditions. The
area
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will
also
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be extended to the other side of the
river
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. A road will be built over the
river
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to the farmland and a residential building will be built there.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words river, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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