the graph below shows the averagcarbon dioxide emiision per persoin the countries uk,sweden, italy and portugal between 1967-2007

the graph below shows the averagcarbon dioxide emiision per persoin the countries uk,sweden, italy and portugal between 1967-2007
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the graph below shows the averagcarbon dioxide emiision per persoin the countries uk,sweden, italy and portugal between 1967-2007
The graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions per human in four countries: the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal, from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
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, the carbon dioxide emissions in the UK and Sweden showed a downward trend,
while
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emissions in Italy and Portugal increased during the same period.
To begin
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with, the UK had the highest level in 1967 at about 11
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, which slowly dropped to around 9
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in 2007.
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, Sweden rose to over 10
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in 1977, but
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fell quickly to 5.5
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.
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, Italy started at 4
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and rose steadily to over 5
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by 2007. Turning to Portugal, it had the lowest starting point at around 1.5
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, but increased gradually and reached over 5
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by 2007.

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