These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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individuals have to
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electronic devices that
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on time
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their working hours.
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grateful
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employees
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those who are showing their productivity in a particular way boss of their company
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promotion
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their job applicants.
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they have a family and their
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children
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challenges
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their task
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all day.
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not a suitable
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decision
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conclude that
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alarming things in their
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to complete their task in their institute .
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is better for their promotion and mental health.

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content
You have identified both advantages and disadvantages of working from home, which shows a balanced view.

Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...
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