The diagram shows the world production output from Asia, Europe, and the rest of the world in different years.

The diagram shows the world production output from Asia, Europe, and the rest of the world in different years.
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The bar chart illustrates the global production output in three different countries (Asia, Europe, and the rest of the world from 1840 to 2000.
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, the diagram shows that the most consumption is in Europe during the period.
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the Asia outcome production showed a fluctuating pattern. The rest of the world demonstrates a stable increase from the 40s to the 60s. A closer look at the data reveals that Asia in 1840 was at its highest among all countries, with 50 percent of output,
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it significantly dropped to 30%in 1880, and continued to decrease until it reached 20 percent in 1920, which was the lowest point during the period, but eventually it starts to recover again in 1960, until it rose in 2000 by 45%. In Europe, it began with moderate growth from 1840 to 1920;
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, it experienced a decline in the
last
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two years of 15% in 1960 and 18% in 2000. For the rest of the world, it started with 10% production output in 1840, with a gradual rise of 35% in 1960;
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, by 2000, it dropped slightly to 32%

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