The bar graph illustrates the figure for travel made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school,
utilizing
five various modes of transport: Use the right word
utilising
car
Use synonyms
passenger
, walking, cycling, Use synonyms
walking
and bus, bus.
Verb problem
apply
Overall
, at a glance, Linking Words
car
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passenger
was the most popular mode in 2010, Use synonyms
also
cycling was less popular in 2010. Walking was Linking Words
also
the most popular than other mode in 1990, and Linking Words
smaller
fraction of trips Correct article usage
a smaller
where
Use the right word
were
mode is
Verb problem
by
car
Use synonyms
passenger
in 1990.
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Firstly
, on the one hand a strong inclination towards walking, approximately 12 Linking Words
million
in 1990. Use synonyms
Car
passengers numbered around 4 Use synonyms
million
in 1990. Cycling, walking and bus the same amount approximately 6 Use synonyms
million
in 1990. In comparison to 2010, walking became a more popular choice.
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Secondly
, Linking Words
however
favors Linking Words
car
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
passenger
Fix the agreement mistake
passengers
around
11 Verb problem
numbered around
million
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Punctuation problem
, but
but
cycling Correct word choice
while
the
less popular 2 Verb problem
was the
million
children in 2010. Buses and walking roughly the same amount, 6 Use synonyms
million
in 2010.Use synonyms