The graph below gives information about the pnumber of estimated cars from 2020 to 2035. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the pnumber of estimated cars from 2020 to 2035. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information about the pnumber of estimated cars from 2020 to 2035. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Generally the UK has seen an unpresidented growth in it's population
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its attraction of migrants immigrating to the UK, from it's globally ranked universites and working oppertunites it's no surprise the number of homes increased, based on an article between 1991 and 2007 the number of homes skyrockted from around 22 million to 27 million homes that's a sudden increase, and that includes huge changes throughout the years
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, in 1991 homeowners were more than renting and in 2007 it's still is with a 10% increase from 60% to 70%,
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the renting scene has decreased especially the most dominating type of renting which is social renting followed by private, and the least of the bunch is social housing which still made the cut. In
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the UK's increase in housing and renting shows the
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effort for progression, but in order of
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equality
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equalness,
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we must create fair shares of housing for all of us to thrive.

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  • estimated number of cars
  • significant change
  • stable/increase/decrease
  • comparative analysis
  • urban planning
  • environmental impact
  • trend
  • notable year
  • long-term implications
  • data pattern
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