The given bar chart displays the proportion of children at school learning four different
music
instruments (Replace the word
musical
piano
, Use synonyms
guitar
, Use synonyms
drums
, and Use synonyms
violin
)Use synonyms
,
from 2005 to 2015.
Punctuation problem
apply
Overall
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
guitar
had the highest learners among all, Correct article usage
the guitar
while
Linking Words
Use synonyms
violin
Correct article usage
the violin
was
the lowest. Verb problem
had
Moreover
, all instruments indicated an upward trend, except for Linking Words
Use synonyms
violin
.
First of all, Correct article usage
the violin
Use synonyms
piano
and Correct article usage
the piano
guitar
were two instruments with a very significant surge by the end of the Use synonyms
period
. In 2005, over 10% students learned Use synonyms
piano
and Use synonyms
guitar
. The figures Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
for
piano
and Use synonyms
guitar
Use synonyms
were
Verb problem
apply
then
experienced a growth Linking Words
to
around 20% and 18%, respectively. By the end of Change preposition
of
Use synonyms
period
, the number significantly increased and Correct article usage
the period
guitar
surpassed Use synonyms
piano
Use synonyms
with
2%Change preposition
by
higher
, which was about 40%.
Unlike Correct word choice
apply
Use synonyms
piano
and Correct article usage
the piano
guitar
, both Use synonyms
Use synonyms
drums
and Correct article usage
the drums
Use synonyms
violin
only recorded a small proportion throughout the Correct article usage
the violin
period
. In 2005, there were about 8% children learnt Use synonyms
Use synonyms
violin
, Correct article usage
the violin
while
Linking Words
drums
Use synonyms
were
not even Verb problem
did
reached
5%. Wrong verb form
reach
At the end
of Linking Words
Use synonyms
period
, there was a mere increase of drummers to approximately 7%, Correct article usage
the period
while
Linking Words
Use synonyms
violin
kept decreasing to around 5%, superseded Correct article usage
the violin
Use synonyms
drums
as the lowest number of learners.Change preposition
by drums