The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school nơ. Summarize the information by selectiong and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (HA)

The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school nơ. Summarize the information by selectiong and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (HA)
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school nơ. Summarize the information by selectiong and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (HA)
The map reveals how a
school
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has developed throughout the years.
Overall
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, some noticeable changes have been made,
such
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as changing the
school
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's building structure and adding new facilities.
According to
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the
school
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, in 1985, there was an entrance and an exit near the car park.
Following
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this
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, on the left side of the
school
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, an office appears right next to the library.
Furthermore
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, there was a smaller car park near the main road and on the other side of the road, a classroom block was shown. Not only one but two classroom blocks face each other.
However
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, the
school
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now has major changes.
Moreover
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, the library has been replaced with a learning resources centre, including a small computer room.
In addition
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, the playing fields have been decreased, and a pool and a fitness centre have been added
instead
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. Not only that, but
also
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the classroom block has been loaded with an extra storey.
Although
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the office remains, new replacements have been made.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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