The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selectiong and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (MINH BUI)

The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selectiong and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (MINH BUI)
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selectiong and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (MINH BUI)
The map displays the changes that
happend
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happened
to a school during the period of time from 1985 and now.
Overall
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, the school
had
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gone through major changes since 1985 by adding more amenities to its
buliding
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building
. One of the most
noticable vraition
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noticeable variations
is removing the car park to the north of the
classrooms
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in the 1985
buliding
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building
.
As well as
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replacing the library with
new
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a new
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learning resources
center
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centre
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, computer room and
classrooms
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. The size of the playing
feilds
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fields
was reduced and
new
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a new
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pool and fitness
center
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centre
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were built to the west of the
feild
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field
. The road in the middle of the
bullding
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building
was removed and replaced by some trees,
while
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to the east of the
school
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school,
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the
classrooms
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buliding
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building
stayed
at
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in
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the same place and a new floor was added to it.
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Also
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Also,
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another
classrooms
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were added to the north of the playing
feild
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field
after its reduction.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words classrooms with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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