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In today's very competitive world, a worker has to possess multiple skills to succeed. Among the skills that a worker should possess, which skill do you think is more important, social skills or good qualifications? Explain the reason and provide specific examples to support your answer.

In the world, working opportunities, having
skills
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 is a must thing to have NOT only one
skill
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 a diffrent
skills
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 that would support you not only in the work but
also
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 in the outside world to succeed in
life
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 in
this
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 essay we will be discusing two sides of importent sides , social
skill
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 and having good qualifications in the working world. Social
skills
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, in my
belief
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opinion
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, are very important not only in the working
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 situation but
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 in actual
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.
it
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 will help people to communicate with the person with that
skill
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 easily and support them with a lot of parts in
life
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.
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, having very good social
skills
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 will determine your relationship with your manager at work, which will support you throughout the rest of your career
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, having good qualifications is not less important than social
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 because you can not put high school student as a project manager in a big company, even if he has good social
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 he lacks experience and a dgree in that department that he should be learning about so yes having a social
skill
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 is not enugh you
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 must a have some dgree in the department that you will be working in. In conclusion, having one
skill
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 or even more without any educational degree is not enough for a person who wants to develop their career to the next level, so both social
skills
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 and good qualifications are important

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coherence
Make sure to clearly separate your ideas into paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on one main point.
task achievement
You provide a clear opinion that both skills are important.

Fully explain your ideas

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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