The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The graph demonstrates Australia's imports and exports in Australian dollars with China,
Japan
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and the
USA
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from 2004 to 2009.
Overall
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, Australia exported most of their
goods
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to
Japan
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and China and
also
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imported a lot of
goods
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from the two countries. The least valuable export was done with the
USA
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. Over the years, demand for Chinese products in Australia increased at a stable rate till 2008 , reaching a little over 30
billion
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, nearly 18
billion
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in 2004, which remained the same till 2009.
Additionally
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, the value of
goods
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bought from
Japan
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remained relatively the same, at almost 19
billion
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, with slight fluctuations.
Furthermore
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, a lot of items were imported from the
USA
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with little attention paid to selling
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The cost of
goods
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bought from the
USA
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was valued at nearly 21
billion
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in 2004, increasing for some time,
then
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dropping back to almost 21
billion
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in 2009.
On the other hand
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, Exports continued to grow. With China, it grew from a little more than 11
billion
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to almost 40
billion
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. With
Japan
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, from a little over 21
billion
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to crossing 40
billion
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in 2008,
then
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dropping back to almost 31
billion
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. In comparison, the growth was very little for the
USA
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, starting at a little less than 10
billion
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to a little over it.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, usa, goods, billion with synonyms.
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