The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates information about the results of surveys in three different years: 2005, 2010 and
2015
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2015,
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about McGill University.
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, at a glance, sports and social facilities were stable over the
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,
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the range of modules offered in the only category throughout the
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sharply fell.
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, student services increased throughout the
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. Until 2010, library resources rose, but again by 2015 decreased.
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, looking at the data more closely, sports and social facilities started
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with 65
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result
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results
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in 2005,
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and at
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at
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by
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the end of the
year
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was stable at 65%.
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,
range
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the range
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of modules offered began at 39 outcomes in 2005, but by the end of the
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fell
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it fell
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and reached 25 outcomes.
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,
in contrast
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, the remaining categories show different trends
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students
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services began at 54% in 2005, increased to 81% in 2010, and
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rose again to 95% by 2015.
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of the
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again increased to 95. Other surveys like teaching quality,
this
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survey is slightly different from the others, it started at 74%, dropped to 72% in 2010, and
then
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increased to 78% in 2015.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, in contrast".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • results
  • satisfaction
  • rate
  • students
  • teaching
  • quality
  • support
  • services
  • facilities
  • library
  • study
  • sports
  • improvements
  • demographics
  • international
  • experience
  • positive
  • trend
  • high
  • decline
  • increase
  • regarded
  • notable
  • influence
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