The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph that was given
illustartes
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illustrates
the level of NO (nitrogen oxide) pollution
that
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apply
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given in grams
on
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per
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kilometre per hour from four types of vehicles
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such
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, such
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as
disel
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diesel
cars
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, petrol
cars
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, lorries and
busses
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buses
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.  
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that lorries and
busses
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buses
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produce
significanly
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significantly
more
emission
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emissions
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compairing
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compared
to
cars
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. Diesel
cars
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generate the least
of
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apply
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emission
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emissions
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at all speeds.
In contrast
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,
busses
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buses
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produce the highest level of pollution. The peak of
wastes
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waste
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from
bus
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the bus
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just
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is just
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above 41g/
kmh
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at
speed
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a speed
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of 130
kmh
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. When the bus
starting
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starts
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the ride, it produces 40g/
kmh
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. By the way, lorrie
produce
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produces
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around 35g/
kmh
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, with the bottom at
speed
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a speed
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of 90
kmh
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and just under 20g/
kmh
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.  In
contrst
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contrast
, both petrol and diesel
cars
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emit far less NO. Petrol
car
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cars
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remain mostly constant
producing
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, producing
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emmisions
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emissions
around 9-11
g
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/
kmh
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.
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Nevertheless
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Nevertheless,
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diesel
cars
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continue being the most eco-friendly type of vehicle, with levels staying between 5-8g/
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kmh
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km
throughout the speed range.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, g, kmh with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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