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some people think that interview is not reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better method. to what extent do you agree or disagree

There is
view
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a view
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 that interviewing is not
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a better
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 method of choosing an
employ
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while
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 there variety of ways.
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while
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 some say that using another
way
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 is the best
way
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i
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I
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 believe interviewing one of the best and
affective
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effective
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 to know their personality and
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person's
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a person's
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 real
abilty
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ability
. In the
world
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world,
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 there are numerous
of
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apply
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jobs which
people
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 can work and
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 every
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people
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have
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 to test before they start their work.
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,
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 there are
variety
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a variety
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 of ways of testing
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, interviewing is the best
way
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 to check. Interviews often depend too much on how a
person
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 looks and speaks. The main reason is that
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this
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way
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people
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 may know their character and personality. On the one hand, a candidate who is confident, articulate may impress interviewers, even if their job skills are lacking.They can ask about previous experience,
problem solving
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problem-solving
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, and how the
person
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 would handle difficult situations.
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,
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some
people
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 think that written tests are better but there are
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 disadvantages.
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while
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 tests and trial work might show
people
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's skills or knowledge and how
person
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 will fit into the company team or culture, it cannot
shows
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show
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 their attitude and motivation .
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, interviews
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are
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 better at showing the whole picture
not
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, not
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technichal
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technical
 skills. In
constarst
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contrast
,
interview
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an interview
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 is the reliable method of hiring.They give a deeper understanding of the
people
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 and help employers to make the best choice. Other methods can support the process, but it is not
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an affective
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affective
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effective
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 approach.

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Task Achievement
Make sure to clearly state your opinion in the introduction and summarize it in the conclusion.
Coherence and Cohesion
Improve the flow of ideas by using linking words like 'firstly', 'secondly', and 'finally'.
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Add more specific examples to support your points about interviews and other methods.
Task Achievement
You provide a clear opinion on the topic and back it up with reasons.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your essay has a basic structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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