Use the information and language from this lesson to answer this The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Use the information and language from this lesson to answer this The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for Use the information and language from this lesson to answer this The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the outcomes of a survey
made
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conducted
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to
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among
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citizens of a particular country to understand why they moved to the capital city between 2000 and 2015.
Overall
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,
although
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employment
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has been the main reason why people decided to live in the capital, study has gained popularity over the 5-year period, reaching the same value as
employment
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at the end
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of the period.
In contrast
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, the other two reasons (family / friends, and adventure) were not the major rational why someone decided to go to the city. With regards to
employment
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, it began at around 60,000 answers, and
then
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peaked at nearly 90,000 responses in 2010, before decreasing steadily to about 87,000 answers. Meanwhile,
study
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the study
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received almost 25,000
anwers
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answers
in 2000 before growing sharply to approximately 87,000 responses in 2010
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the same as
employment
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.
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, around 10,000 citizens answered that they moved
due to
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family/friends reasons or because they were seeking
for
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apply
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adventure in 2010. Both rose gradually to about 22,000 responses for family and friends and 15,000 for adventure in 2015.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words employment with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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