In
this
century, more young Linking Words
individuals
have their own style of living and more opportunities Use synonyms
of exploring
the world. Change preposition
to explore
While
some Linking Words
people
believe that these Use synonyms
individuals
should move out once they Use synonyms
grew
up as adults, some opponents think that teenagers should continue living with their family regardless of their age. In Wrong verb form
have grown
this
essay, I will discuss both viewpoints with examples and opine that young Linking Words
people
should step out of their comfort zones to improve their adaptability to Use synonyms
new
environment when they are Correct article usage
a new
matured
.
On the one hand, proponents of leaving home think that it is crucial for adults to develop skills of survival, Replace the word
mature
such
as cooking, cleaning and financial Linking Words
management
as they are Punctuation problem
management,
matured
enough to live independently. Replace the word
mature
Individuals
with strong self-care ability are usually less dependent and able to give other Use synonyms
people
’s better impression that they are less troublesome and more down-to-earth. Compared to Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
that
always live with their Correct pronoun usage
who
parents
, they generally have more reliance on their Use synonyms
parents
for doing the housework for them, Use synonyms
hence
having less incentive to learn more Linking Words
life
skills to equip themselves. Apart from Use synonyms
life
skill learning, living alone Use synonyms
also
increases the level of freedom because of having no more immediate relatives’ intervention. Residents can do what they want to do at home and not Linking Words
being
criticised by anyone. Wrong verb form
be
For instance
, inviting guests to the house and hosting parties until late Linking Words
night
. Both the host and the guests tend Change preposition
at night
have
more enjoyment when there Verb problem
to have
is
no Correct subject-verb agreement
are
relative
in the house.
Fix the agreement mistake
relatives
On the other hand
, opponents argued that moving out household leads to higher living expenses Linking Words
Linking Words
such
as electricity bills and food costs. Most of the spending can be minimised when living with Punctuation problem
, such
parents
, Use synonyms
thus
it would be easier for Linking Words
individuals
to save up for their future use. Use synonyms
Otherwise
, they would easily have Linking Words
strong
financial burden Correct article usage
a strong
especially
when their income level is not high at the start of their employment. Punctuation problem
, especially
Moreover
, the family bonding would be weaker if Linking Words
people
are not living Use synonyms
together with
their family members. As they do not stay at the same place for most of the time, the interaction between them is limited despite having frequent and scheduled gatherings.
In conclusion, even though living outside the family is costly and reduces the time of seeing the family physically, it is necessary and beneficial for young Linking Words
people
to start Use synonyms
new
Correct article usage
a new
life
and have more private space by moving out when they get older. The earlier they start to live independently, the quicker they can learn about taking care of themselves for their entire Use synonyms
life
. At the same time, they should make a balance of living alone and meeting up with their Use synonyms
parents
, Use synonyms
thus
not losing the family connection Linking Words
while
not living together.Linking Words