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The chart below shows the annual rice production in four countries in 2005, 2010 and2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the annual rice production in four countries in 2005, 2010 and2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the annual rice
production
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 in four countries (A, B, C, and D) in the years 2005, 2010, and 2015, measured in
million
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tonnes
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.
Overall
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,
Country
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 A consistently produced the most rice throughout the given period,
while
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Country
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 D had the lowest
production
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. Most countries experienced either growth or fluctuations in
production
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 levels over the years. In detail,
Country
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 A’s rice
production
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 rose steadily from around 45
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005 to approximately 50
million
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tonnes
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 in 2015.
Similarly
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,
Country
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 B saw an increase from about 27
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005 to a peak of 43
million
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 in 2010, followed by a drop to roughly 35
million
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 in 2015.
Country
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 C had the lowest
production
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 in 2005 at around 5
million
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tonnes
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 but experienced a slight growth to just over 7
million
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 by 2010, before falling back to the initial level by 2015.
Country
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 D’s figures remained relatively stable over the years, showing a minor increase from around 4
million
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 in 2005 to about 6
million
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 in 2015.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, million, tonnes, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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