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The chart below shows the annual rice production in four countries in 2005, 2010 and2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the annual rice production in four countries in 2005, 2010 and2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart compares four
countries
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 in terms of annual
rice
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production
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 in three years - 2005, 2010 and 2015.
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,
countries
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 A and B produced significantly more
rice
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 than
countries
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 C and D across all three years.
Country
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 A experienced a steady increase in
rice
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production
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,
while
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country
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 B showed a rise followed by a decline.
In contrast
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countries
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 C and D had relatively low and stable
production
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 throughout the period. In 2005,
country
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 A produced around 45
million
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tonnes
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 of
rice
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, which increased to just above 50
million
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tonnes
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 by 2015.
Country
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 B began with approximately 27
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005, peaked at 43
million
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tonnes
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 in 2010, but
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 declined to about 35
million
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tonnes
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 in 2015.
Country
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 C had modest
production
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, starting at 5
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005, rising to around 8
million
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tonnes
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 in 2010, and slightly decreasing again in 2015.
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,
country
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 D’s output remained low and relatively stable, ranging from 4 to 6
million
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tonnes
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 over the decade.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, rice, production, country, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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